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Tsmith2010
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 Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 10:06 am |
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An image of a WarCraft Death Knight
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Coldbook
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| Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 11:30 am |
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Hey ya, you're right very warcrafty, but still needs a few hours work, defining and tidying up. You heard of rob zombie? his persona in particular. A suggestion, blow me off if you like. If you like you could try writing a few key themed words in the corner of your page, and as you draw refer to them constanly. Maybe your interpretation of a cryptic, minamilistic priest.
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jerm
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| Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2003 4:31 pm |
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i really like the use of colors; this has warcraft written all over it. quick crits: the sword is well done, some perspective issues near the bottom: the runes on the lower half seem biased towards to closer side. the perspective on the top runes came out fine, so that's something to consider when lining up the lower half.
and the 2 extensions on right about the handle area seem odd as well. the one closer to his head is smaller than the one on the left, which also doesn't follow the perspective. hope i'm not nitpicking, just couldn't help noticing ^_^
lastly, you did a good job on bringing out the image elements in most areas (as in, it's drawn sharply). although there's some dusty edges on the gloves, particularly near the hands and his right glove. i realize the colors of his cape and gloves don't contrast strongly with each other, but perhaps some darker outlines would do, like you added on his left forarm (which looks great). and if you do break out the paintbrush for some outlining, some definition on the flowing hair would finish off that area as well.
but overall, very nice pic; i'd very much like to see you continue this style with other characters. |
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Tsmith2010
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| Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 8:43 am |
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THnx guys....good comments..
Yeah looking at it again I can see the fuzzy area with the hands. Needs to be defined more for sure. Same with the perspective. Definitely needs a little more work.
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Tsmith2010
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| Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 8:44 am |
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THnx guys....good comments..
Yeah looking at it again I can see the fuzzy area with the hands. Needs to be defined more for sure. Same with the perspective. Definitely needs a little more work.
Thnx |
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| Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 8:50 am |
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| I must have hit post twice...arrr..sorry |
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