[D0M1N4R715]

I just colored this. I think it might be finished, but I'm not too experience with shading. So if anybody can give me some tips, that'd be great. Also if you find flaws such as in the figure itself don't hold back. The first image is the rough draft, and the second is the (maybe) finished. Eh, ignore the writing on the sides, they were pre-coloring reminders.




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[Dan]

looks like spike (cowboy bebop), but with brown hair. I'd recomend shortening the fingers on the right hand so that just the first knuckles show and do something about the feet. It kinda looks like a balerina pose
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[Feinam]

Something about the gun looks off, seems like it's recoil would mess your aim up bad with the shape of the handle and the balance.

[Mari]

I agree on the feet, and something about the hand that's holding the gun looks a little odd too... Try and think of how much a gun actually weighs - now that you take that into consideration, how would you hold it? Unless your fingers are extremely strong, I don't think you'd hold a gun like this guy.

For the rest it's all good.

[coolmanmatt]

Obviously when holding a gun you wrap your thumb around it, or put it right on that thing at the back, you know so it looks like he's about to cock it!
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[D0M1N4R715]

ok ok, few things here, yea the gun is too perpindicular, it should be at about 60 degrees... and he's not spose to holding the gun forcefully or even normally. It's kind of haphazardish, not gripped tight, and just kind of sitting in his hand, but obviously that was a failed representation, so i'll keep that in mind next time. dammit, crazy ballerina feet, thnx for the feedback guys, always trying to improve =) It doesn't completely suck does it?
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