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Delita
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2003 1:18 pm     Reply with quote
My first contribution to the forum, C&C plz?

My first drawing of DS, 3 years ago

http://www12.brinkster.com/delx/Deathscythe.html

Last year's draw, Colored on PS 7, last week.

http://www12.brinkster.com/delx/NS.html
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CwStone
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 9:09 am     Reply with quote
YO

the colored v is pretty hot, and pencils r cool too.

if u want some advice (who doesnt) id say that when coloring on ps, try to...its kinda hard to say typing...i dunno, smooth stuff out more, like use larger, softer brushes. then, use smaller brushes (or just less pressure with a tablet) for details. this will give u a neater, more finished look.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 11:52 am     Reply with quote
Sorry to be harsh, but you haven't improved as much as you could have in 3 years. Your drawing has better posing, but the fine points are missing. Details are absent, and the drawing has points which are crooked. Try to be more precise, and forget about color right now. Work out your sketches, till they look better.

Keep trying, you'll get there. Sorry if this isn't what you want to hear. Embarassed
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