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legolas · Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:57 am

Hi all,

I'm a starter at photography and was hoping you guys would want to give me some constructive critisism or comments.

Shots:

Should I crop more of of this one? I'm quite happy with it, but maybe it's a bit too much environment?

Others:

If you guys would like to see more you can look at my photography gallery.
http://www.homeoflegolas.com/photography.html

Johannes
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varg · Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 5:20 am

Ser bra ut
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legolas · Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 5:33 am

Is it me, or is that unreadable? Could you explain that?
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nexykun · member Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2003 Posts: 85

that pretty cool man

like 1 and 2

but yeah you could zoom on the mushrooms a little more
mess with it till you find a composition you like
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bellas · Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 9:31 am

great job in first
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Molako_Plus · Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 6:39 pm

awesome pics brotha, this kinda stuff heklps us out in the field.
naw i have refrence pics for me shrooms Smile

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The Niles Edge · Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 10:20 am

*EDIT*
shoot, hopefully the picture shows up soon, i think Dotster is having major problems. everyone i know who baught a domain there says their page is down...(i.e. i'm not retarded, the picture WILL work sometime)
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yeah, those are all really cool, i especially like the mushroom one. i think you are right, a little cropping is in order, i think almost making it movie screen dimensions (cinemascope?) would be cool. here's what i mean, im sure it could use a lot of tweaking:

Dan · Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 3:41 pm

they look pretty cool. I think you might want to try experimenting from different angles. I think all of those are pretty much taken parallel to the horizon, aka not looking up or down at all.
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Iddi · Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 11:54 pm

Varg was saying "Looks good"

I like them alot, keep up the good work!
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Matthew · Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 12:06 am

Varg, haha det var riktigt kul, nu blev jag glad igen. :)

legolas, great work on the first one, the 3rd one looks really busy.

Matthew

Iddi · Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 7:50 am

Oi, visste ikke at det var s� mange her som var fra skandinavia. Razz

And yeah, I agree with Matthew...
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legolas · Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 3:14 am

Hi all,

tHanks for all those rep[lies, i'm glad you liked them ant found them worthy to crit.

I'll experiment more with cropping.

About the third, he is verry buissy, but it's so hard to get the background blurred when your subject is off a couple of meters. Anny tips on that?

Thanks again,
Johannes
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Edix · Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 6:04 am

There some great photos
For personal prefrence I would remove the leaves at the bottom of pic (1)
I especialy like the perspective in (3)