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D0M1N4R715
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 Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 6:09 pm |
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Hey All, this is my second post with an image (a lil juicier than the last). Please give any opinions on what's wrong/right bout this one. I personally like it, but feel free to speak your mind!
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aflyingbishop
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| Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 6:53 pm |
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| I like the idea. But it seems like his squating. Good job though. |
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xzacto
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| Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:14 pm |
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yes yes.. nice style.. my beef with it though, is your line. I think this would be a much stronger image than it allready is if you had line variation  and for the love of GOD, man!!! PUT SOME COLOR INTO IT!!! 
great image, keep up the good work... i really look forward to seeing it in color.
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JohnnyPixel
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| Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 4:49 am |
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Good job man that looks like a lot of work
some advice I would give
and sorry if I'm rude
things that can be improved
1. the design is fine but why dont u push it a little more and give it more a of a dirty "grimmer" feel
2. You lines are kind of shaky have more line quality and variety all the lines are the same shape so try to experiment with them it'll make ur drawings have A LOT of confidance.
besides that i woudl say start plotting out the light source
good job keep it up!
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D0M1N4R715
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| Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 12:18 pm |
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i agree with the shaky lines johnny. I was hesitant to post it for that reason, because it looked fine before i erased the underlying pencil... oh well lesson learned!
I just finished with this pic last night... I think it might have come off a lil more anime than i would have liked, so I might end up changing some features. but here ya go (c&c please)
Yet again, its still in the rough form, and I still need to add color. If anybody has any helpful suggestions about coloring cities, i'm all ears, cuz I'm a newb at coloring them.
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