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Martin Rebas
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Remember me? I painted a girl and then Neo+Trinity about two months ago, and it took me ages to convince people that I'd actually painted them from scratch and not done any overpainting... that was a weird experience, both irritating and sort of flattering.
Anyway, here's a half-finished vampire picture; my friend Jenny was the model. Any ideas for improvements? Does the hair look good or weird?
/Martin
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2003 7:26 pm |
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| Looks good... Can we see the ref? |
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2003 7:45 pm |
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The hair as it goes along her face dosent seam right. I looked earlier today and couldent place it so I didnt post. However I think a few strands of hair out of place along there would make it look less painted. Especialy since the bottum of her hair isnt perfect either.
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Cadence
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2003 9:15 am |
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wow I love this!!
a few suggestions: the hairline looks fake, their should be some small hairs like babyhairs there... also please give her fangs, big, sharp and bloody fangs.....ahem, that wasn't really a suggestion 
Anyway, can't wait to see this finished. Love the hands by the way  |
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Merystic
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2003 12:30 pm |
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That is a really really gorgeous picture...you have much talent.
only crit is that nothing about it really says 'vampire' to me...she just seems like a random gothic girl...but of course that's only minor. good job on the pic.
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Max
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 9:22 am |
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Very nice image. Great atmosphere!!!
but something doesn't work with the composition, can't tell what thought... |
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AndyT
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 10:36 am |
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Max: Maybe it's the perspective?
Because the horizon is so low maybe we should see more of the legs?
Just what I think at first glance. I might be wrong.
And I like the image btw
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Max
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 12:28 pm |
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hmm,...I am not sure Andy, maybe
anyway,...the image is great and the vampire looks so lovely.
maybe too lovely |
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DeadbeaT
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| Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2003 3:34 am |
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Looks great.. how about some drops of blood by the left side of her mouth?
Could we see refs?
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