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Bylo
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 Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2003 9:59 am |
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Next for the gallery in december, a female face.
WIP
Suggestions about something?
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Edix
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| Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2003 3:00 pm |
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Rooky question:
Whats WIP? |
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Snakebyte
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geoman2k
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| Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2003 12:14 pm |
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looks pretty good, but i think the nose is messed up. little bit too low, and a little bit crooked- the left side seems a little lower than the right. my advice is to look at the sketch in a mirror to get a fresh look at it. then you can change it untill it looks correct flipped or not flipped
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| Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2003 7:32 pm |
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looks great, she is pretty too 
I think the nose could look ok if the angle was more looking down on her face, but the hair doesn't reflect that, so I think changing one of them would make the picture even nicer.
great job on the lips too
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treeboy
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2003 7:08 pm |
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eyes are a bit too wide and too far apart. You need to squish them in a bit.
Because right now her right eye looks like itsa bout to fall off the side of her face. Even in a front view you can see a little bit of each side of the head and top of the head. Right now i dont get that sense, so try and bring the eyes in a bit and give a sense of the sides
quick edit: i mean on the right side of her face i dont get that sense because the eye is so far over, the left and top are what im talking about (although the left eye is a bit big too, just not quite as far over as the right eye)
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2003 7:43 pm |
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Looks very serios. I like the way her nose sits. Looks more like a real person and less like a drawing.
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Bylo
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2003 10:27 am |
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Small update, didn't have much time the last few days (was busy getting 20  )
Don't really like it... it's to.. well basic... nothing really special.. so I'm not gonna take it any further .. I'm gonna start a new one. |
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Max
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| Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2003 9:20 am |
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I really like the facial expression!
well done |
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