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maxetormer
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 Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2003 11:49 am |
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Aint all that great image, but i guess it is good for a study,
The course of a painter is never to be happy with the work he he damn, =)
i hope i looks decent enought 
The WIP thread:
http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?t=34606
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2003 10:20 pm |
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hi all =)
for who is interested i have been chageing the pic all day long and i think i have finded a composition that makes me kinda happy =)
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Matthew
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2003 11:49 pm |
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I love how this piece came out and the painting style is very good. You kind of work like I do cause I keep changing the motive in my pieces all the time.
Very good, keep up the good work maxetormer. :)
Later
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 1:32 am |
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| This is a strong piece, and strong composition. (I had some suggestions for improvement but took it down. Too much concern for anything is not way of master). Nice work. |
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maxetormer
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 5:29 pm |
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=) thanks a lot for all the nice commets folks =) this forums are really great too keep yourself inspired and motivated, thanks god i finded it, ha ha,
yeah i change my paintisgs as i go, if need it to keep my self interested on the subject but i really have not thought to much about that, nice analizys Mattew,
ha ha =) thanks for the supoort.
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 8:13 pm |
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As obcesive complusive as i am, i made some chages on her arms,
i am case beyod help juar juar thanks for seening and posting at this thread
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| Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 9:18 am |
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| I like the anatomical changes you made to the male warrior, but his new arm looks flat (the one far away from us). Especially where it meets the shoulder it looks very odd/different. Examine your lightsource(s) a little closer and see if you can't add some form and definition to his far arm. I think it would be illuminated enough to make out some detail (especially considering the detail we can see on the female warriors far foot). |
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