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Topic : "Don't Enlist Me In Your Fears" |
Aura member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2001 Posts: 55 Location: Yuma, AZ
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 7:57 am |
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Don't Enlist Me In Your Fears
crushed dreams at night
leave my heart tame for a fight
enlighten me baby, come comfort my fears
disarrayment of the angels
we are still persuing the light
clouds decending to an aggrivating height
rivers carry me to an open symphony
how can these angels be so kinder to me
Baby lead me down by the sea, walk with me, envelope me. Here I lie,lost in the lyrics of an endeavoring song, sweeping up below me are the desires of a reality.
Peace embraced only within my own sanctuary
my heart is speeding up, but not fast enough
Baby if you come around, I'll love you as I promised I would. My heart has been thrown all around, still I feel I'm beginning to break, this terrible silence that I can't contain, I am about to break save me from this fate.
Was it all a mistake? Can I talk to you? take me to a better place, let me escape. It can't always be your way. Tammy and Gina they never stop looking for the ultimate high. But when they find it, it'll be the first and the last time they get to experience the bliss of their existance.
Left Beside A Destiny
The ability to open my eyes and blissfully sing. Oh baby, you know how it feels inside
to wipe these tears away that run like a stream. oh baby tell me do you feel the speed of my each pace?
Can you remove me from this emptiness?
Dispite this Melody I feel this heart breaking, please help me, don't let this heart continue to break.
Lost in your arms
our hearts sing a song
encompassed in this enchantment
leads to my destiny
you will never ever know how it feels
to have your heart cry out with sorrow
but baby even though you're not crying inside
I feel my heart snickering at life.
Can you, do you understand baby,
this feeling of striving?
my depression seeps through into an empty creek filling it with all but my screams
of a dream that can't be seen.
Am I still feeling the same? Heavy and lifeless? It's the aching in my head, it's the blisters on my heart, it's the longing for sanity. I say that with all sincerity.
I linger with this favor,
grasping all that I hold dear
struggling to savor all my dreams of a song.
lost in your arms
I can't relate to...because you left me
beside a contemplation of a revelation.
be true to me baby as I am to you
all I want is to love you. Don't break my heart baby, my heart will forever bleed with passion for bliss and happiness in your arms. Oh baby even though you're not crying inside, I feel my heart snickering at our lives.
Bestow upon me baby, the desires of life, to remain a member of all this strife.
Darling I love its true
but you do not have a clue of how your little angel feels inside.
If only you weren't captivating,
grasping each of my dreams and encircling them with fury.
Baby the tears keep falling, I can't keep stalling, my place on this earth remains in the stars, above all my scars, and with all my force I must pursue this story.
Darlin I wanted to be true, but you decieved me baby, now there's nothing left to do, but go on and keep from crying too, cuz if I don't I'll end up dying, and Baby, I'm not lying, I will always love you. Forever I am true.
[ January 25, 2002: Message edited by: Aura ]
[ January 25, 2002: Message edited by: Aura ]
[ February 01, 2002: Message edited by: Freddio ] |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 10:52 am |
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very emotional. Im assuming you wrote them.
The sound like they were written from the heart and I think thats always the best way to write.
they seem like they were meant to be songs.
[edit: I preffered the other title of the post better]
[ January 25, 2002: Message edited by: Awetopsy ] |
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Jezebel member
Member # Joined: 02 Nov 2000 Posts: 1940 Location: Mesquite, TX, US
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 2:39 pm |
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Don't worry Aura, I think after posting the photo of yourself you are likely to get many more replies. *giggle*
Nice poem by the way... very fluid words. I don't particularly care for the use of the word "baby" though but thats just me. It probably has some kind of personal meaning for you.  |
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travis travis member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 437 Location: CT, USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 4:20 pm |
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those sound like relationshippy poems. I'm at the 'rotten stuff that happens when those poems end' place right now - so poo to them |
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12345 member
Member # Joined: 25 Nov 2001 Posts: 127
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 5:10 pm |
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WHAT? NO PIC?!!!! *THROW AWAY MY HUGE KLENEX BOX* |
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Vesuvius member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 718 Location: Newton, Ma, USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 6:42 pm |
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hahahaha angst-tastic (and melodramariffic) |
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Aura member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2001 Posts: 55 Location: Yuma, AZ
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2002 9:24 am |
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maybe your right bouts the pic thing jez but i would never admit to it cuz ya know it would be kinda concieted. thanks you guys oh and i don't like the baby thing either but i thought i'd try something new. |
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Shadow-X- member
Member # Joined: 29 Oct 1999 Posts: 259 Location: Formerly Ontario,Canada, Now Vancouver, B.C, CANADA, where people hate the Toronto Maple Leafs
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2002 8:37 am |
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Ok, my friend just sent me this, seriously. Usually, he looks at nasty things like rotten.com, and this link is at stilepoject.com, and there can be some sick things, I usually cancel any messages he sends me that are links, but this time I accidentally clicked on it, and this video, is 31 seconds, is sooo appropriate for this thread, according to the topic. Take a look, you'll have a good laugh, guaranteed.
http://go.stileproject.com/?v=rap3.mpg
(please forgive me for the pr0n ads....)
[ February 01, 2002: Message edited by: Shadow-X- ] |
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