[Joel_Longie]

My first female illustration, sort of rough, but done at this point. I was trying to get sort of an ambiguous feeling from her expression with sort of realistic/Anime feeling. c&c welcomed

[Horrens]

good start
but her face looks a bit flat

[jr]

realistic/anime feeling? that's the angle i try to pull with my illustration.
everything stops at the eye. the eyes looks like it's painted on. like those old egyption statues. they don't look like eyes. pay more attention to the upper lid. i know about the anime but look how close the brow and upper eyelid is. i think when you resolve that problem this piece will work out much better.
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[Joel_Longie]

Thanks guys,

Their seems to be a consensus among people about the brow area, I will definitely rework it.

Joel

[B0b]