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Grenadine · Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2003 5:05 pm

hi!
coloring in photoshop an old live draw. tell me what's wrong plz! Smile

SolarC · Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2003 12:02 am

There is too much space between her ribcage and pelvis. Otherwise looking excellent!

Matthew · Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 7:47 am

Hey

That�s a real nice drawing and I really had to make an over-paint, nothing wrong with your drawing but you could add more color and such to make it more interesting.
I hope you don�t mind if I post it.

see you
Matthew

Grenadine · Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 10:45 am

hey! funny you did the same:)

You'r right about the colours, maybe I will continue it later!
I think that your drawing will be more interesting if your lines were more nervous, sometimes we don't know exactly where the volume ends:)
nice work however!
bye!

toiletPhish · member Member # Joined: 05 Apr 2002 Posts: 120

nooo don't colour it!!!!!!!! it looks good coloured allready
the colours are a little bland but it still looks good that way
this way it looks...very...bengalic/spoogedemon Smile

which is good thing!
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Grenadine · Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 11:14 am

WOW!

it's a very nice comment: bengal and spooge are very very good!
I don't think you can compare my work with them Embarassed

thank you a lot ToiletPhish:)

Bobuke · Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 1:31 pm

"Grenadine" - this is a very interesting picture as it is. The look of her face tells us a story about her life. She is really beautiful and even if the proportions are not like we are thought in art schools it�s such a personal way of expressing her feelings that I wouldn�t ask you to change anything!
Just make more pictures with this woman as model - if you get the chance!

I think your colourscale and lines and her look make an excellent mix!
Show us moore!
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