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Sonique128
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 Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 1:03 pm |
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here's a close-up of the somewhat completeled areas.
im sure i have a lot of anatomy problems. but concern right now is that she doesn't look like she's swimming under water.
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Synista
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 3:46 pm |
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Hmm. Try making her arms more straight and closer to the body, as if she were exteding, if you know what I mean. Oh, and her neck seems a bit too long.
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Iddi
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| Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2003 10:27 pm |
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I agree with Synista. I would make her hair a little more straight too, as she is swimming. Maybe make some small bubbles below her tail, it might have some effect.
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CHPX
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| Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2003 12:32 am |
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Lookin good Sonique,the upper torso looks great. I'd suggest cocking her head back more pulling her arms towards the body and as the others guys said straightening the hair. That way she'd look like she's mid thrust 
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