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Lil'sister · Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2003 5:31 am

Those images have already been posted on http://www.cafesale.net/forum (this is the best french forum Very Happy

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But I would love to know what you think!

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computer reprobate · Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2003 6:13 am

They're really rather brilliant IMO.

nice work! Cool

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Sukhoi · Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2003 5:01 am

Hi "sister"

Good stuff, although I think the sketch of the sword wielding babe looked better than the finished result. I can't quite explain why. Perhaps it could be the angle of the sword. If it was tilted 90 degrees as to what it is now, with both ends pointing toward us, one would get the feeling that she's holding it right. Otherwise I'd say that her arms aren't quite flexed enough. As if the sword would drop to the ground.

Could you show that sketch aswell? (Yes, where would I have seen that you wonder, hehe)

I like the waving girl and the smoke guy, but the geisha takes the cake. She's just too cute.

See ya'

Sukhoi / Rasmus

Lil'sister · Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2003 3:04 pm

Thank you computer reprobate Very Happy

this is really kind of you Embarassed

Eh Rasmus! thanks a lot, I agree something is weird on my rendering of the girl with the sword and i am posting my sketch as well (the hands and left arm was a little bigger). thx for all the good comments Wink

I also got an early color version and the waving girl colored by Marek Bogdan.

Exoudeous · Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2003 3:20 pm

Good jobs on all those pictures

For teh girl with the sword, the arm on teh right seems to get way to big below where the sword is, if you just srank it a little it should be fine, and to make it look like she is holding the sword there, the girls arms have to bend more forward at the elbow more, and the sword has to be moved up on the left arm so the sword has something to rest on.
hope that helps.

keep up the good work.
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hedlamb · Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2003 3:24 pm

I've not much time, but I just wanted to say that you've produced some really good work in this thread. Nice colors on most of these.

amichaels · member Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2003 Posts: 105

I think the biggest problem with the sword wielding girl is that her arms reach down to her knees almost. The forearms are really elongated so it makes the whole thing look funny.

I really like the girl with the smiley face button though. The print on the dress and the big boots are really cool.