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animagic
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| Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2003 8:56 am |
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A new piece by Carsten? Right on bro!
You're always very successful with your characters and atmosphere. Those have been strong points of yours since I've known you. I'm not so sure that your effects work here but they're pretty cool still. The pic is a tad disjointed. Know what I mean? How would you crit the piece?
Well, keep it up. Lates!
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animagic
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| Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2003 10:02 am |
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hethe! (sorry I haven't written yet  ) thanks for the compliments dude, although your characters and environments make mine look like a little golden book... they're fantastic!
yeah my effects are still sucking...(any advice on that?) the effect I wanted to achieve was a transition from her digital rambling to the world she's jumping around in...but it ends up looking like what it is... text overlaid atop an image.
If I did it over again, I would most likely change the way I rendered the girl...
her design is faulty in that the way I WANT her to look doesn't come through.
looking at it objectively I would do two things:
1) work the text into the image more (but I don't know the best way to do this?)
2) re-render the cybernetic girl with more detail
and I very well may do those two things, however I need some advice and suggestions from good friends like you and everyone else here as to how to go about it.
you guys are the greatest evar 
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