[noxi]

This on one of my few speed paintings. Well I don�t know what requires to speed painting officially, I just made this quite fast without refs.

I saw one pic by Mikael Noguchi. It was a pic of nice looki�ng girl with black dress. Kinda inspired. But this is way different.

I would like to start a better version of this picture. A lot of things are wrong in this pic though to get started. Next time i�ll use ref with the woman. Any else suggestions of how to make a better v?

[Phyrexial]

I can't put my finger on what is wrong with the face, some of the non-newbie artists here can probably say something on that. Other than that I think she looks kinda top heavy in that picture. Not enough legs, kinda big torso. I'm not even talking about just her breasts either, just a really big kinda torso. I'm not sure if the hat is supposed to look the way it does, but I think its a bit too tall. It doesn't look like it fits her head correctly. Most hats I've seen like that one fit rather snugly onto the head as opposed to this one that seems to be sitting just barely on the top of the head. Either that or she has a cone head.

[Phyrexial]

Oh yeah, and something looks very wrong with the perspective on the railing she is leaning on.

[noxi]

This allways happens. I can�t stand of some of my recent works after just few days. Oh well, I said this before and i quess i�ll say it again, i like the mood in this picture. Everything else: gah...

Never say no to refs....