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BGA
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2003 8:38 pm     Reply with quote
Well, I really need crits for this, so please post something if you look at it. Anyone really. I need crits bad, and it's for something, so post something everybody, cuz I need as many as I can get, cuz this needs to be finished soon for something I'm doing it for. That being said, I want this to be an awesome pic, but I can't really get the skin tones right, I want the boobs to be smaller, and I can't seem to get that to look right. the face needs a little work, but over all, I want depth in the clothes, and the overall body. I want her to look realistic obviously.

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Leviron
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 22, 2003 9:38 pm     Reply with quote
http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/tut_learn.php

You can start by reading from there.

I also suggest using layers for different items or features that you draw so if you stuff up something and save its not lost.

You should really start with a sketch.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2003 2:24 pm     Reply with quote
You need to find some reference of the type of woman you want to draw in this pose. Look in magazines or google image search.

The proportions are off and the lighting is inconsistant. Fixing those two things will make this look much, much better. If you're unable to find decent reference for the lighting, use an action figure and a desk lamp to simulate what you want. Post again when you're finished or further along. Good luck.
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