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Zorglub member
Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2000 Posts: 268 Location: Ontario Canada
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 1:30 pm |
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Done from reference.
I know there can be improvements made but I'm not sure what.
I need brutal and honest critiques (I can take it). So here it is.
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maxetormer member
Member # Joined: 14 Dec 2002 Posts: 259 Location: M�xico
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 2:11 pm |
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It is a very good image the shapes are very propocitanted and the volumen is there.
I think it lacks on higth ligths and really dark areas,
It would help to see the photo u used nice looking painting a bit to smudgi on some parts the rock buildings I think they don�t look solid enought, the water does not look transparet enought, but never the less with out seeing the reference u used i can�t tell if it is allrigth, since the water on that river can be very dark.
keep it up!!! _________________ Never underestimate the stupidity of the human race.Sorrow is the contrast of happines then sorrow is some how the esence of happiness + = |
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CwStone member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2003 Posts: 489 Location: New York, USA
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 2:16 pm |
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i think it might look good if u added some tiny white glints to the water, not a lot, but enough to give an overall efect. But even w/o 'em, it looks really good. And as maxetormer said, i think u could also use some brighter highlights and darker shadows. _________________ -Chase |
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Zorglub member
Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2000 Posts: 268 Location: Ontario Canada
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 8:22 pm |
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Thanks guys that was very helpful. I need to work on the background some more, that is what I had the most trouble with. And yeah now that you mention the water could use a bit more highlights and darker areas
By the way, here is the reference I used
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