Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Gallery/Finished Work
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "Ancient ship"
Zorglub
member


Member #
Joined: 20 Dec 2000
Posts: 268
Location: Ontario Canada

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 1:30 pm     Reply with quote
Done from reference.
I know there can be improvements made but I'm not sure what.
I need brutal and honest critiques (I can take it). So here it is.

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
maxetormer
member


Member #
Joined: 14 Dec 2002
Posts: 259
Location: M�xico

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 2:11 pm     Reply with quote
It is a very good image the shapes are very propocitanted and the volumen is there. Wink Very Happy

I think it lacks on higth ligths and really dark areas, Very Happy

It would help to see the photo u used Very Happy nice looking painting a bit to smudgi on some parts the rock buildings I think they don�t look solid enought, the water does not look transparet enought, but never the less with out seeing the reference u used i can�t tell if it is allrigth, since the water on that river can be very dark.
keep it up!!! Very Happy
_________________
Never underestimate the stupidity of the human race.Sorrow is the contrast of happines then sorrow is some how the esence of happiness Smile + Sad = Smile
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
CwStone
member


Member #
Joined: 27 Jan 2003
Posts: 489
Location: New York, USA

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 2:16 pm     Reply with quote
i think it might look good if u added some tiny white glints to the water, not a lot, but enough to give an overall efect. But even w/o 'em, it looks really good. And as maxetormer said, i think u could also use some brighter highlights and darker shadows.
_________________
-Chase
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Zorglub
member


Member #
Joined: 20 Dec 2000
Posts: 268
Location: Ontario Canada

PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 8:22 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks guys that was very helpful. I need to work on the background some more, that is what I had the most trouble with. And yeah now that you mention the water could use a bit more highlights and darker areas
By the way, here is the reference I used

Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Display posts from previous:   
This forum is locked: you cannot post, reply to, or edit topics.   This topic is locked: you cannot edit posts or make replies.    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Gallery/Finished Work All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group