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Deprive
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Rarely do I post at art forums, but I'm starting to need help. I just started really working on backgrounds in my pictures, and have been using my base knowledge to get this far. Your c&c on the background would be greatly appreciated. Thank You
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Deprive
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| Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2003 2:03 pm |
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Antialias
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| Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2003 3:14 pm |
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| I like the background so far, though in the left close up, and the right aways in the distance, there is some.. foliage, or just green areas that don't fit quite as well for me. I also think some clouds might add to the background also. Perhaps lighten/haze the mountains a bit to push them back further. |
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Eric Pommer
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| Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2003 3:37 am |
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I don't see any picture...?
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RJPJR
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| Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2003 3:19 pm |
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Just a thought...
Wouldn't it be better if you centred the woman in the picture she's slightly off to the right, it might help with the composition.
If the road markings were more symmetrical and you put some clouds in that were angled into the centre then it would help draw the viewers eye's into the centre of the piece.
Keep up the good work |
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