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Adamant
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Hi All,
I haven't posted in a while because I've been so busy. Here's one of my latest pieces done for an RPG book cover. Thanks...
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 3:35 pm |
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Wow, not one comment. Gee!
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 4:55 pm |
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yea how come no else has posted for this?
neway, this looks great to me i cant really find anything wrong with it...well, except for two things.
1. The left ogre guy's furry, uhhh, dress (?) thing (i dont know what to call em) looks really smudgy. I suggest making it look more like the middle guy's furry thng.
2. The middle guy has all this great blue light on 'im, but the ogres dont have a trace of it. I sugest putting some of that on them.
other than thoes crits, i really like this piece. Keep it up!
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 5:38 pm |
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I think the faces of the left and middle ogre could do with some work.
I really like the right one.
The sword looks fragile somehow.
The human guy's sixpack doesn't seem to be centered IMO.
The lighting is good except for the blue light as CwStone already mentioned.
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| Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2003 7:29 pm |
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| How the hell did I not see this before? And how the hell did no one else reply? This is incredible. Absolutely incredible. Don't know what else to say about it, I wouldn't change a thing. Except for that blue lighting, which is baffling me as to its origin, and as to why it's only lighting certain areas. Other than that, though, it looks just great. |
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Adamant
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 2:54 pm |
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Thanks guys for the great feedback. I really appreciate the critiques. They will be very helpful for revising the piece. You guys have offered great suggestions. Cheers.
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 6:58 pm |
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Hey Adamant, great pic  The lighting is very nice especially on the ogre on the right. My only crit is that the ogre on our left, his pose makes him seem almost timid or dumbfounded. But hey, I guess ogres aren't known for being too smart in the first place
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| Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2003 9:02 pm |
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jasonN - Thanks mate. Yeah the ogre does look pretty dumbstruck which was my intention. If you follow his eyes he is focusing on the sword not the warrior as he is captivated by it. Cheers.
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