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MORBspeed
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 11:14 pm     Reply with quote
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Absent Minded Abe
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 8:50 am     Reply with quote
It's cute! XD It sets out what it's supposed to do. ^^
I think the kid's eyes should be looking more at the girl though, but it's nice! ^_^
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:18 pm     Reply with quote
I really like this. I'm not much for anime style, but this is a nice little scene. My only suggestion would be that I thought at first that they were sitting on a bench, while I think they are supposed to be on a fence. Perhaps the fence could extend to the edges of the scene. Nice job.
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Critical Pete
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2003 9:49 am     Reply with quote
Yeah, that's cute. I agree with extending the fence, or maybe just erase the vertical lines at the end to give the illusion of it going off into the distance without harming the composition too much. I like the rabbit. ^^
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