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MORBspeed junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Jul 2003 Posts: 2 Location: Tibet
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 11:14 pm |
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Absent Minded Abe junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Jun 2003 Posts: 42 Location: AZ, USA.
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 8:50 am |
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It's cute! XD It sets out what it's supposed to do. ^^
I think the kid's eyes should be looking more at the girl though, but it's nice! ^_^ |
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Bibbit junior member
Member # Joined: 24 Jun 2001 Posts: 32 Location: Big D
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2003 6:18 pm |
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I really like this. I'm not much for anime style, but this is a nice little scene. My only suggestion would be that I thought at first that they were sitting on a bench, while I think they are supposed to be on a fence. Perhaps the fence could extend to the edges of the scene. Nice job. _________________ Alice
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Critical Pete member
Member # Joined: 28 Jun 2003 Posts: 126 Location: Vancouver, B.C.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2003 9:49 am |
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Yeah, that's cute. I agree with extending the fence, or maybe just erase the vertical lines at the end to give the illusion of it going off into the distance without harming the composition too much. I like the rabbit. ^^ |
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