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Gordillo member
Member # Joined: 18 May 2000 Posts: 308 Location: Guildford,UK
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:05 am |
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Hi all,
here is my last work, a homage to the amazing world created by China Mieville for his book "Perdido Street Station".
Max 5 and Pshop 5.5.
Your coments are welcome( as usual)
![](http://www.iespana.es/Gordillo/2D/perdidoST01.jpg) _________________ ALBERTOGORDILLO
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-HoodZ- member
Member # Joined: 28 Apr 2000 Posts: 905 Location: Jersey City, NJ, USA
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:10 am |
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no crits from me! do you have the wireframe for the building? |
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scabuX member
Member # Joined: 26 Jun 2003 Posts: 58 Location: Germany
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:12 am |
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for me - it is awsome...great color...like the bird and lights...wow <- that's it.
mfg
scabuX _________________ The way is the goal - Not the goal the way
There are always one, who is better... |
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:38 am |
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Hello
I think there is a very nice mood in the picture and the building looks very cool but, I think the
background really distracts the image cause it cannot really be told if it is a big mountain in the
background or if it is clouds.
aslo the three very bright light sources is a little bit too bright but that is just my opinion.
The movement in the pigeons is a killer and the character to the right looks very cool too.
I hope I wasn�t to harsch and remember this is only my point of view, I hope something helped.
have a nice day
Matthew
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CwStone member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2003 Posts: 489 Location: New York, USA
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 7:00 am |
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yo dawg
this is awesome. _________________ -Chase |
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AndyT member
Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2002 Posts: 1545 Location: Germany
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aColdOldKodiak member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2002 Posts: 298 Location: California
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 8:24 am |
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The light rays don't feel right... well mainly on the clouds.
Just look really color dodged at this point.
Also, is it just me, or does the human figure seem way too big? (so the ladder and pigeons too)
Using the hanging wire as a referance to distance, there just isn't enough distance for that guy to be that big... is there?
It's hard to tell, as you arn't quite sure where the hanging wires start.
Anyways, it's still very nice, the detailing looks awsome, and the big fortress/cathedral is awsome. _________________ http://jcaart.cjb.net |
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Critical Pete member
Member # Joined: 28 Jun 2003 Posts: 126 Location: Vancouver, B.C.
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 9:01 am |
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That's crazy good... Just that there are too many smokestacks and none of them are smoking. |
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wayfinder member
Member # Joined: 03 Jan 2001 Posts: 486 Location: Berlin, Germany
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 9:19 am |
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this is fantastic, you can almost feel how badly the garuda wants to fly, to FLY!!
i would have envisioned the atmosphere to be more greenish-golden when i read the book, but this is awesome..
do the dome of the cactus people next! and then the dump! and then isaac's lab! and then, and then, and 1=�?I%T"�%?)=ZHQ�$=HBQ34
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wasssup member
Member # Joined: 29 Oct 2002 Posts: 275 Location: London, UK
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 10:31 am |
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hi Gordillo, your work is really superb, lights...details ect. are all great.
the only crit from me(maybe), the composition could be a little stronger...anyway this one rocks |
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