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Gordillo
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:05 am     Reply with quote
Hi all,
here is my last work, a homage to the amazing world created by China Mieville for his book "Perdido Street Station".
Max 5 and Pshop 5.5.
Your coments are welcome( as usual) Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:10 am     Reply with quote
no crits from me! do you have the wireframe for the building?
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:12 am     Reply with quote
for me - it is awsome...great color...like the bird and lights...wow <- that's it.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:38 am     Reply with quote
Hello

I think there is a very nice mood in the picture and the building looks very cool but, I think the
background really distracts the image cause it cannot really be told if it is a big mountain in the
background or if it is clouds.
aslo the three very bright light sources is a little bit too bright but that is just my opinion.
The movement in the pigeons is a killer and the character to the right looks very cool too.
I hope I wasn�t to harsch and remember this is only my point of view, I hope something helped.

have a nice day
Matthew


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CwStone
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 7:00 am     Reply with quote
yo dawg

this is awesome.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 7:30 am     Reply with quote
Yeah it's insanely amazing! Shocked
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 8:24 am     Reply with quote
The light rays don't feel right... well mainly on the clouds.
Just look really color dodged at this point.

Also, is it just me, or does the human figure seem way too big? (so the ladder and pigeons too)

Using the hanging wire as a referance to distance, there just isn't enough distance for that guy to be that big... is there?
It's hard to tell, as you arn't quite sure where the hanging wires start.

Anyways, it's still very nice, the detailing looks awsome, and the big fortress/cathedral is awsome.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 9:01 am     Reply with quote
That's crazy good... Just that there are too many smokestacks and none of them are smoking.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 9:19 am     Reply with quote
this is fantastic, you can almost feel how badly the garuda wants to fly, to FLY!!

i would have envisioned the atmosphere to be more greenish-golden when i read the book, but this is awesome..

do the dome of the cactus people next! and then the dump! and then isaac's lab! and then, and then, and 1=�?I%T"�%?)=ZHQ�$=HBQ34





YOU ROCK
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 10:31 am     Reply with quote
hi Gordillo, your work is really superb, lights...details ect. are all great.

the only crit from me(maybe), the composition could be a little stronger...anyway this one rocks
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