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Matthias321us · Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:24 pm

i spent about... the time doesn't matter, I thought it came out very well for the time spent, ne ways c&c?
http://stu.aii.edu/~mcw123/Untitled-1.jpg
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geoman2k · Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:40 pm

very cool, great design... but it isn't done is it?? all you have here is some light pencil lines... no shading, no color, no ink, no contrast, no background,,, you could put at least another few more hours into this, couldn't you?
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Matthias321us · Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:49 pm

hours? that's thiry minutes tops... I guess I could cg it... I just don't think the ribbons make it special like I had planned
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Matthias321us · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 8:03 am

don't suppose somebody could tell me how to fix any anatomy problems?

I'd be much obliged.....obliged ^_^ that's a good word
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vanishing · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 2:30 pm

the only anatomy problem i see is his shoulder. i think it makes it look like his left clavicle (wish bone) bone is looks a little out of shape. but thats just my opinion =)..

Frode · Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2003 5:22 am

And his right upperleg seems a bit weird, make the bottom line straight instead of curved up.

Tell me if I'm wrong.

Ritaku · member Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2003 Posts: 56 Location: uk

legs are fine from where i'm sitting, good anatomy etc. i like it. although maybe the pose is a little cliche but hey you still do a good job of it. as for the ribbons, i can see pretty much exactly how you feel. i think things up then can't draw them to the same effect. as for your ribbons, i think if you were to put more form to them (more ribbons and make them interweave into more solid shapes?) and also strong foreshortening etc. have them come really close and really far from "the camera" or whatever and they stand out. keep it up =D
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