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PhatTexta member
Member # Joined: 16 Oct 2001 Posts: 140 Location: Sydney
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 8:58 am |
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Critical Pete member
Member # Joined: 28 Jun 2003 Posts: 126 Location: Vancouver, B.C.
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 10:25 am |
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Hmm... Well I have to say I like your other works better Phat. The texture on the planet on the left is pretty damn ugly... The background is real nice though. |
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CwStone member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2003 Posts: 489 Location: New York, USA
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 10:52 am |
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OMG the texture is fine! Who says a planet is pretty?! Anywho, i think thats amazing phat, keep it up! _________________ -Chase |
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Frode member
Member # Joined: 01 Mar 2003 Posts: 140 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 11:43 am |
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I made it my background... hope that says enough. |
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CwStone member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2003 Posts: 489 Location: New York, USA
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 11:57 am |
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good idea _________________ -Chase |
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M. C. Barrett member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2003 Posts: 145 Location: The North of Texas
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 12:00 pm |
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The textures aren't too terribly ugly, in my opinion. What does bug me, however, is the inconsistent lighting and the warped ring around the middle planet. Unless you specifically intended the ring to be experiencing some gravitational interaction with the nearer planet, (in which case, it still seems to be warped in the wrong direction), there are probably ways you could have rendered it in a more consistently elliptical shape. The perspective on the ring itself is nicely done, but the whole thing seems lopsided.
A bit about the composition- I'm not finding those comet/meteor things very helpful in creating an engaging rhythm, possibly because they're fairly well isolated into a distinct zone with much the same level of interest as other major zones of the image (I call it the TV-dinner effect). Looking at this piece, I tend to find myself locked into these compartments. Maybe extending the comets/meteors further into the distance, toward the center of the image would help knit the sections togather. |
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aColdOldKodiak member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2002 Posts: 298 Location: California
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 12:10 pm |
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just wanted to point out that the 2 farther planets have sunlight hitting on their "top" side... while the closest gets it from the side.
Also comet tails point away from the sun. _________________ http://jcaart.cjb.net |
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PhatTexta member
Member # Joined: 16 Oct 2001 Posts: 140 Location: Sydney
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 8:11 pm |
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ill change some stuff
btw texture? its not 3d if thats wat ur refering to i brushed the whole thing |
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Nocturnal member
Member # Joined: 24 Oct 1999 Posts: 97
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 8:56 pm |
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I think the textures are great. The only thing that i see that bugs me are the slashes at the top and that huge spotlight shooting out from the planet on the left.. they don't seem needed really.. unless your trying to convey that the the planet is on the brink of explosion and of course the light issue..
Other than that it's great!
-Nocturnal
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hwslut member
Member # Joined: 18 Jun 2001 Posts: 100
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 9:10 pm |
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Your webpage is extremely similar to 2Advanced. From the navigation, to the way the windows on the building light up. Heavily influenced? |
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PhatTexta member
Member # Joined: 16 Oct 2001 Posts: 140 Location: Sydney
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 9:10 pm |
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CwStone member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2003 Posts: 489 Location: New York, USA
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Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2003 8:07 am |
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that one looks a lot better! _________________ -Chase |
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