[jakub]

hi. these are three works i made at school or instead of doing homework... this sort of paper we have inspires me
please comment and criticize, especially on the last one

thanks!








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[AndyT]

I like the 2nd one especially. In the first one everything that is not lit by the candle should be darker.
In the 2nd one the only thing I don't like are the colors of the guy.
Especially the green skin.

The third one lacks contrast I think.
The idea is great (and so are the others) but something bothers me about the way he's drawn.
Sure it's not supposed to be anatomically correct but it should be more coherent somehow IMO.
I think it looks as if his head is too close to the left (his right) shoulder for example.
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[Iddi]

I love them. I like nr. 2 best, but the other ones were very good too acctually. Though, The old man's hands could have been edited. Keep it up!

[Critical Pete]

Haha! Those are great! I like the first one the best... Last one is nice too, but I have to agree with Andy that it lacks contrast.

[jakub]

thanks. i'm always a bit afraid of contrasts it seems
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