[Serg]

New version I worked last days. Corel photopaint. Comments and critiques are welcome.



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[Ritaku]

pretty good, anatomy seems correct from the bottom upwards all the way to the neck..... the head is probably the part that needs most work although you've got a pretty good start to the shading on it anyway. smoothen and sharpen the outer edges of her head with some shading and maybe give her less roundy shape chin etc. also her neck is too long, especially with her head tilted to the side like that, although i can see the effect your aiming for with the neck and tilt. just shorten the neck and stuff. hm... looking at it again maybe the head is too small for the neck... yeah thats it enlarge the head a bit and it might help! nice colour scheme in my opinion
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[Molako_Plus]

i dunno wat ritaku is talkin about.
this pic is great ...GO COREL!!!!

love the colour scheme and yur style. the only flaw that i see is that her breasts look flat.....maybe you need some brighter highlights and darker shadows. i myself rally dont know how to fix that but i do know that is the only thing lacking.

great job and keep it up!
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