[maxetormer]

UPDATED: the ligth issue on the eyes and the incorporation of the red "F" as well as some clean up on the gradients on the eyes and on where the metal reflects ligth


The idea of the excersice was to mix somethig i like with my studies on poster design and since i like sience ficcion a lot this is what i came up with

this i something of the stuff i make for my design school, this is a poster to promote my poster designs, the text above reads as this: "Graphical Ficcion"
this poster is meant to be used on an hipothetical exposicion of my poster design work, well that is all see ya later

bw it is made on vectors


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[Molako_Plus]

problem with yur poster is that the focus point is dead centre of the page (red erasesr).
from there the eye really has no route to follow in order to "read" the full poster.
your main focus should be the title. try changing that area by giving it some kind of colour maybe. try a coulour u already have in the pcture though. or maybe make the eraser a different color anf make the F in ficcion red to attract the eye.

many ways of fixing design flaws... soo keep it up!
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[maxetormer]

thanks for the commets and the help that idea about the red "F" sounds good ill give it a try before i print it (and ask my teacher for counselling too of course).

never the less i have not seen what u wrote, but now that u mention it, the red eraser draws quite some attecion (thanks for the heads up on that). thanks for the input (do i will not make to many changes cause of the semeter dead lines) the idea of using some color on the above text block sounds very good so i will use it.

see ya, thanks for takeing the time to crict my work
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[Molako_Plus]

no prob. just a fellow design student trying to help out.

i myself go to the School of Design in Toronto.

dont let dead lines stop you from designing top quality work.
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[Khatru]

What caught my eye (pun not intended) is that the eyes are clearly copied and pasted, yet the two sides of the robot face are drastically different in terms of lighting. I'd reconsider that.

[maxetormer]

Thanks

mmmm, nice good that really that scaped my mind,
You see my desing teacher is not exactly an expert on terms of light ( he has not Ilustration backgroud, hecks!! he can�t draw very well) so he and all my class mates did not thougth of telling me advice on light.

Thank god i posted this in here i am getting such good feedback, thanks so much I will fix the light on the eyes in no time
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[xmmx]

not my area of expertise (as if I had one) but yeah I think the red F would help out a lot, other then that I like it
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[maxetormer]

Thanks for the nice commets Xmmx I am glad u liked the image and thanks all for the really nice
feedback on the image as well, i think it looks better

Molako_Plus: What is the name of your design school?
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[Molako_Plus]

sorry for posting so late... its george brown college, school of design.


not a bad program, full of proffessors that have exp in all fields of art. so i like it!
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