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Matt Ryan
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 4:12 pm     Reply with quote
here is an image im working on for my portfolio. please give me any crits on composistion lighting, whatever. its still rough, but still comments are appreciated. here are some of my steps so far.









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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 9:47 am     Reply with quote
This is good, I truly admire what i see so far.

The contrast is probably the number one thing i see of this, along with the simple style. Nice nIce Cool
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2003 10:00 am     Reply with quote
Yeah that looks great. However, composition-wise the left side seems awfully empty... It would look better if you moved the guy on the ground more to the left and perhaps closer to the front so you can put some perspective on him ( making the picture overall more dramatic ).
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 29, 2003 11:49 pm     Reply with quote
thanks for the tip pete, ill do it.Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 11:18 am     Reply with quote
Nice one!!
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 12:56 am     Reply with quote
thanks Smile

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