[Chris.]

hello out there,

here is a pencilsketch, a hunting wildboar-rider, feedback is welcome

greetings
chris

[Eric Pommer]

Great little sketch. Something bugs me about the pose of the orc, however. The way he's holding the axe so high up the handle bugs me, though I don't know if there's anything actually wrong with it. The axe itself is cool-looking. There are big anatomy problems in the shoulder of that arm, however. The other hand doesn't look quite right. The finger is too long, I think, and the thumb needs to be more obviously a thumb instead of a finger.

The boar looks cool, and the rendering is interesting. In terms of composition, I might suggest cropping off the right side of the picture so the figures are less centered.
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[Chris.]

hi eric,

thanx for the feedback, i think you�re right. this version is better now i guess. the composition-thing doesn�t matter at this time, i will care about this if the pic gets colored.

[Chris.]

so hello again,

here is something new, 2 hunters and one drummer. i want to improve my skills, so critics are (very) welcome