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francmidi
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Did I post this earlier? Don't know. Just for checking the link. Do you see a red X? Thanks for your help, and if you want to give me your C&Cs - be welcome! 
Portrait
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eyalyab
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:05 am |
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no red X.
i havnt seen it before so.. looks good =]
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Timid
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:54 am |
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Gorgeous use of colors. I really like this piece... However, it looks like eyes are a bit off. One or the other is a bit wonky in some way... Wish I could be more specific.
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Absent Minded Abe
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2003 1:52 pm |
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I think having more of an ambient glow on the edges of her face would amplify the believability of the lighting. On our right side mostly. I'm not too good at lighting though.
It's her left eye that looks odd, I think it's looking a little bit too much to our right.
It's looking good! ^^
Oh yeah, put some more gloss in her eyes too! ^.^ |
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francmidi
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| Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 3:14 am |
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Thank you all for your comments and for checking the link. About the eyes I got into a sweat. Have a look at the reference (well, my painting is not really like her  ) : LINK.
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