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Malachi Maloney
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amazing hands you did---photorealistic..
the warm lit shadows on the legs and hands are sweet but it seems like
her face isnt shaded as much as it should be...it's not balanced
with the rest of her skin tone or the hair...it stands out a lot....
maybe you meant it to be that way so if you did , it's kool.
awesome awesome...i cant stress my liking for your lighting enough
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2003 1:46 pm |
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nice painting you did have done!
I want to see more of your newer works !!
What could it happen if you try loose strokes? hehe
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2003 4:02 pm |
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This is much more illustrative than what you normally do, imo. like the colors.
It rocks.
I'm all for the looser strokes myself.  |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2003 5:29 pm |
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| You're certainly getting better. Nice composition and colors. Great work! |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2003 8:52 pm |
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| Change is good. And this is good. Can't wait to see more of this change. |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2003 9:15 pm |
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I agree . . this change rocks :>
Maybe you could vary your strokes? Like keep the focus nice n clean like it is there, and in the background have nice loose n big strokes?
I love the composition and those weird looking monsters . . i think this tells more of a story than your other pieces n thats y i think i like it so much more :> keep it up 
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| Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2003 11:58 pm |
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I like the pcutre allot.
but her face is.. just not quite spot on like the rest of the image is.
Just my thoughts... |
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2003 5:33 am |
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Malachi> Great Work! 
I agree with elam, in that this one has more of a story to it . A frame of a movie as opposed to a one off glamour shot.
Thanks for the step by step. each one worth a thousand words, maybe more!
I've put them together in one image to pour over... and learn from.
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| Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:58 am |
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Great work! The composition and style is a nice change from your previous work. This has a much more of a dynamic happening. My only crit would be that cavern ceiling looks unfinshed like its missing a step or you just got fed up I think if you would push it just a little more if would really bring the pic to life. Cheers!
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| Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 4:13 pm |
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I definitely like the new direction you are taking. The image has a photorealsitic feel without actually looking like a photo graph 'fantasied up'
The scene and characters/subjects are very well rendered and imaginative.
I look forward to more of this style.
Excellent work man. 
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| Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 8:39 pm |
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Wow very nice... The art on her dress is awesome too. 
Btw, I kinda preferred her eyes in pix no. 8 compared to this one.
She looks a little anxious and shocked here but in no. 8, she looks really stunned. |
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 2:25 pm |
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Thanks for the comments and crits everyone. Very helpful and motivational.
Thanks again,
Malachi
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| Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 7:32 pm |
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I wonder how I missed this. Anyways tis really cool
Love that ripped up banner, looks awsome for some reason.
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| Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 5:30 pm |
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i like it alot.. very photorealistic
nice booty!  |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 8:27 pm |
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| Amazing job rendering the image, but man, is that EVER phallic. Hell, in the first step drawing, the big long shaft is even bent in the middle. Just a thought |
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