[Space Monkey]

Did this over the past few days or so... I'm not sure if I like the composition - it's missing something, but I'm not sure what...






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Uhh... yeah, what I just said.

[merlyns]

thats a really nice picture.

I think the vegatation in the back could be defined a bit more.

furter I cant see any problems.

-david
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[Medical]

I think there should be some 'ambient' shadows on that transporter..
from the forest trees etc.. are all the trees chopped off to let the
sun shine?
also, if there would be some trees in front of the sun
and if lighting was a bit more darker, those self illuminated
parts of the transporter wouldn't be so 'unnecessary'

and maybe it looks too clean to be located in a jungle.
unless that transporter transports also itself when used

well, those were the things _rushing_ through my head when
thinking how to improve this. darn, It's so easy to see how to
improve something you've not done. I really wish I could be
a stranger looking at my piece of work

but very, very nice picture I like the it much.

I have to disagree with merlyns though that background looks
good as undefined. it brings up the main subject.
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