[merripen]

Greetings all. Been wandering around here some time without posting, and have been very impressed and inspired by the quality of work.

Following is a link to a work I "finished up" a few months ago. The first in a series of seven, I keep going back and tinkering with little bits and pieces. Having trouble deciding whether it is where it is supposed to be or not, so any feedback is appreciated.

www.digitalnocturnes.com/art/unsight.jpg

My thanks.

[Matthew]

Hello
You may reconsider to change the resolution for the image (save for web) cause it took a while for me to see it and I actually have Cable so for modem users it would take very long time to load the picture, just a tip. :)

The picture is very nice, nice colors.
Matthew

[merripen]

hmm... I did save for the web at 600x300, resulting at about 50k or so. Maybe broadband has spoiled me and that's still too big

Thanks, I'll save smaller in the future.

[Al Ian]

The basics of the image are good. Nice choice of colors, what it missing is contrast and a focal point. Everything, even the diff colors seem to blend together due to lack of contrast. All in all I think your doing a fine job!
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