[tilokani]

This one was a request for a personal website, and was requested in the sort of aboriginal style, in which the insides of the animal are more important than the outside. Of course the drawing here isn't anything great. It actually looks like crap, but the overall effect I think has some potential. Or am I wrong?



This one was done using real life reference. I wanted to keep the look of "cheery" or "cheesy". But in the process of this, I may have ruined the look of the glass as lalPOOO has explained to me privately.

I'd love to get critiques on these two, if possible.
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[merlyns]

no crits or comments on the first pic.

but the second picture looks nice, you did a a good job on the scanner, but the cola and the glass dont look very good comparing to the rest.

the cola should have a sorta red purpe tone and darker to the bothem of the glas the glass could use a wee bit softer highlights.
and the glass casts a shading, the shading should have some sorta of relection of the liqued in the glass.

hope it helpes a bit, my english s*cks sometimes.

-david
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