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Shotaro
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youre actually quite advanced for your age...way better than i was 2 years ago...i'd love to see some other types of art from you cuz i can see your're into the anime...good portrayal of emotions in the subjects--hope to hear from ya later on
edit: what drew said also 8]
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Drew
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2003 5:23 am |
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These are a good start. I have one crit that pertains to most of them. Define your lightsource before you start and stick with it. All of your work suffers from inconsistant lighting to one degree or another. You should use reference from life or at least a photograph to help you figure out how the light will fall on your figures. Don't use other artist's work for reference, you'll just add their mistakes to your own.
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Tomasis
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| Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2003 9:38 am |
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hey I remember you .. Your manga pics are very good.. good luck!
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Shotaro
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| Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2003 1:14 am |
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| Drew wrote: |
These are a good start. I have one crit that pertains to most of them. Define your lightsource before you start and stick with it. All of your work suffers from inconsistant lighting to one degree or another. You should use reference from life or at least a photograph to help you figure out how the light will fall on your figures. Don't use other artist's work for reference, you'll just add their mistakes to your own.
Keep it up, and show us how much you improve! |
You're right, I never really mind the light source.. sometimes the light comes from the left �nd the right, even though I know it's impossible -_-
I'll follow your tips as much as possible. Thanks a lot everybody for your support ^_^
P.S. dr bang: nani?!!
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