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Al Ian
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I know, three paintings in as many days, ok so Im getting back into it. 
Glowing Man
This is a redo of one of my very first paintings. I took alot of crits into consideration before repainting it. I think this shows how far I've come, and shows just how truly far I still have to go LOL.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/1755757
Comparison
New on Left, Old on Right, tell me what you think!
http://www.deviantart.com/view/1755764
As always, C&C appreciated and USED!! Yes, I will USE YOU for your advice
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r3t
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| Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2003 7:25 am |
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i like the greenish fire guy a lot. Looks very stylish
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eigam
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2003 8:02 am |
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| The fire guy is cool, but I like the glow guy much better. The fire guy looks flat, and has no background or surroundings. The glow guy's background gives it much more atmosphere to the illustration. |
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Drew
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| Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2003 8:10 am |
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| The new version is much better, but at this point it looks unfinished. Get rid of those sketchy lines and put shading in for his hand, and the other parts of his bady that the hand will illuminate. Remember where the lightsource is coming from and you should have a decent piece of work. Keep it up. |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Thu May 01, 2003 12:20 am |
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Hey
I see you are getting better and better too there Al Ian, keep up the good work.
Matthew |
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