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jayceeL
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Here is some conceptart I did a while back...
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AndyT
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 9:08 am |
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I like the rider 
Maybe the details kinda take from the bike.
Will there be a colored version?
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 9:27 am |
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cool pic... maybe the bike would look better with a more rounded front?
just a thought
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 10:04 am |
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really nice you must color this!
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 12:27 pm |
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Uuh, i love that Cartoonish Style!
Reminds me of my own chick+byke picture 
I think her Breast is a bit too small
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 8:30 pm |
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Nice work! Although the bike looks unusual being divided up like a Bab5 spaceship, I don't see any problem with it. And the girl's breasts aren't too small, they're too high. :]
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| Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2003 8:36 am |
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there is nothing wrong with her breast !! the rib cage is smaller to make her more girly and less womenly, i got no problem with that 
oh and great work.
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| Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2003 9:23 am |
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| damnit how the hell do people draw like that |
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| Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2003 5:39 pm |
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again...the bike looks a lot like a spaceship with the extended pointy end....a round short end would be better.....would it be alright to color this?? its so tempting....i dont know how you havent already! awesome use of line weight
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| Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2003 8:46 am |
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Thanks everyone for your comments:
Andy T - I am a sucker for details
Size - Yep you might be right with the rounded front, I gave it the pointy front because I wanted to give it a more dynamic, faster look, as it is a hoverbike, I was thinking in the lines of jetplanes and spaceships.
Merlyns - thanks but I wont be doing any coloring for this for now.
Neff, Anthony - I don't think the breasts are too small(I guess it is a matter of taste). I think it is the whole top part of her body that is a tiny bit too small.
Odd - Thanks for the great explanation
Scr - Practice, practice, practice
The_insider - Go ahead, it would be fun to see it colored, as long as you state where the original design and lineart came from.
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