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mr.wonton junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 36 Location: sf,ca
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 9:29 am |
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I'm getting really frustrated on this shot and I just can't seem to get the realism of the vlues right....Can anyone tell me what I'm doing wrong? Keep in mind I'm trying to get this to a level it could be shown in film. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Oh, the sky is jusy a standin....
Thanks so much!!!!
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the_insider member
Member # Joined: 06 Apr 2002 Posts: 547 Location: DENVER COLORADO--rocky mountains whoo hoo!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 1:41 pm |
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everything has a good sense of photorealism EXCEPT the moon and the lumination its giving off---its way too bright and the moon itself doesnt look too round...just tone down the light...everything else is gravy.. _________________ www.andresguzman.com
---Would you believe me if i told you i was a liar?... |
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Chthonic Divinity member
Member # Joined: 22 Aug 2002 Posts: 191 Location: Philly
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 4:14 pm |
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something about that house and mountain dont seem right.... i think they are too detailed for being so far away and dark outside.
but otherwise, its extremely good! |
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Godwin member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2002 Posts: 701 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 11:52 pm |
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in a film... so it's a matte painting?
perhaps it isnt detailed enough yet, but it looks great nonetheless _________________ Derelict Studios|Godwin's Space |
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UkiTakuMuki member
Member # Joined: 20 Nov 2002 Posts: 156
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2003 12:53 am |
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KEWL! the moon really is kinda ovalish.. but i love the monochromatic feel :p |
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spline member
Member # Joined: 29 Jan 2003 Posts: 71 Location: Stockholm -Sweden
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2003 4:32 am |
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Hmm, I think you need clouds on the sky to make the picture more intresting, and the lights from the house are to bright and to round. Then it seems like there are some problems with the lightning, but you could get away with that...
But its a nice picture... |
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Radiance junior member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2003 Posts: 27
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2003 10:43 am |
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it looks quite good already. the moon and the lights in the house should not have this glow around them (there is no fog visible). and i agree with spline, the lights in the house are pointlights. why? |
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mr.wonton junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Jun 2000 Posts: 36 Location: sf,ca
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 9:51 am |
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ok here's an update......any crits welcome!
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Max member
Member # Joined: 12 Aug 2002 Posts: 3210 Location: MIND
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 11:52 am |
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Holy!! WOW, the atmosphere is just unbelievable!
Stunning work!!! Absolutely great scales and the lighting is fabulous!
The hill in the BG seems wrong - maybe too flat? ah, doesn't matter.... |
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eyalyab member
Member # Joined: 11 Jan 2003 Posts: 308 Location: Israel
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Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:25 am |
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this is soooooo gooooood. it looks so real.
i only dont undestand what are those things on the mountain on both sides of the castle that look like weeds. i think they dont belong..
great work, again! |
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pulpy ze brachypelman member
Member # Joined: 05 Nov 2002 Posts: 82 Location: France
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:00 am |
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damn it's cool !!!!! i'm in a "haaaaaaa !!! something's behind me !!!" feeling. |
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coraline junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Apr 2003 Posts: 12
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:23 am |
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your last piece is really beautiful.. atmosphere.. everything. great job.. |
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Radiance junior member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2003 Posts: 27
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 2:00 pm |
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those last 2 pics have a great sky. but i find the 'props' too dark, as if they are unaffected by the moonlight.
i liked how the buildings etc are lit in the first pic, albeit a tad too bright. |
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