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mr.wonton
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 9:29 am     Reply with quote
I'm getting really frustrated on this shot and I just can't seem to get the realism of the vlues right....Can anyone tell me what I'm doing wrong? Keep in mind I'm trying to get this to a level it could be shown in film. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Oh, the sky is jusy a standin....
Thanks so much!!!!

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 1:41 pm     Reply with quote
everything has a good sense of photorealism EXCEPT the moon and the lumination its giving off---its way too bright and the moon itself doesnt look too round...just tone down the light...everything else is gravy..
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Chthonic Divinity
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 4:14 pm     Reply with quote
something about that house and mountain dont seem right.... i think they are too detailed for being so far away and dark outside.
but otherwise, its extremely good!
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Godwin
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
in a film... so it's a matte painting?

perhaps it isnt detailed enough yet, but it looks great nonetheless
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UkiTakuMuki
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2003 12:53 am     Reply with quote
KEWL! the moon really is kinda ovalish.. but i love the monochromatic feel :p
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spline
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2003 4:32 am     Reply with quote
Hmm, I think you need clouds on the sky to make the picture more intresting, and the lights from the house are to bright and to round. Then it seems like there are some problems with the lightning, but you could get away with that...

But its a nice picture...
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Radiance
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 09, 2003 10:43 am     Reply with quote
it looks quite good already. the moon and the lights in the house should not have this glow around them (there is no fog visible). and i agree with spline, the lights in the house are pointlights. why?
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mr.wonton
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 9:51 am     Reply with quote
ok here's an update......any crits welcome!



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Max
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 10, 2003 11:52 am     Reply with quote
Holy!! WOW, the atmosphere is just unbelievable!
Stunning work!!! Absolutely great scales and the lighting is fabulous!
The hill in the BG seems wrong - maybe too flat? ah, doesn't matter....
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eyalyab
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:25 am     Reply with quote
this is soooooo gooooood. it looks so real.
i only dont undestand what are those things on the mountain on both sides of the castle that look like weeds. i think they dont belong..
great work, again!
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pulpy ze brachypelman
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:00 am     Reply with quote
damn it's cool !!!!! Shocked i'm in a "haaaaaaa !!! something's behind me !!!" feeling.
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coraline
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 7:23 am     Reply with quote
your last piece is really beautiful.. atmosphere.. everything. great job..
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Radiance
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 14, 2003 2:00 pm     Reply with quote
those last 2 pics have a great sky. but i find the 'props' too dark, as if they are unaffected by the moonlight.
i liked how the buildings etc are lit in the first pic, albeit a tad too bright.
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