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JesperGB
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Made in Photoshop and with a pen'n'paper drawing I scanned
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TimDavis
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2003 7:39 pm |
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Looks cool! Her waist down is a little weird though. I think the leg on our left is a little short.
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Dan
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| Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2003 3:54 pm |
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it's kinda funny how she's squating down in that weird pose and i should point out that she's carrying her pistol with her left and also wounded arm.
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DL-44
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| Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2003 8:27 pm |
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Hate to say it, but....uh....
she looks like she's taking a dump man.
the pose + the facial expression...it's just.... |
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Aikon_B
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| Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2003 1:03 pm |
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looks like she's twirkin tooooo hard....haha but other than that great  |
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Benny
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 6:18 am |
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| there are some shortcomings,but the integrative feeling is pretty! |
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Nazarov
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 9:14 am |
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First thing that came to my mind was that she was taking a dump
Crit: Right foot is little busted, left hand too. the left cheek (or the line next to the ear) bone is misplaced and the way that the hair dissapers above the ear looks odd. Try adding little hair there. By minimum work this piece could look way better. Try studyig textile techniques, the nice feminine "features" could show better ...
Blah blah.. crit crit Nice work |
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cartman
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| Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 2:43 pm |
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The drawing is competent, but the rendering could use a little more work. There needs to be a more clearly defined light source and more contrast between light and shadow.
Her nipples are a nice touch. They show her "excitement" about being in combat;) Also, I don't think she looks like she's taking a dump. Everyone knows that pretty girls don't poop. |
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