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kosta55555
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dwawn handly and painter in photoshop (very superficial as you can see,
30 min)
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Matthew
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 10:31 am |
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Hello
I looked at your drawing beneath and got inspired to make an over-paint because I haven�t colored line-art in a while. I shortened her left arm but maybe it was better before, hmmm.
If you don�t want me too post this picture let me know and I will take it down.
btw good work on yours, but try to find the perspective and then paint the ground to later on add movement strokes in the perspective direction, just as a tip so I hope you wanted C&C otherwise I am sorry.
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kosta55555
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 2:34 pm |
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IT'S OK I DON'T HAVE APROBLEM WITH THAT
I LIKE YOU REFLACTION ON THE BOOT BOU YOU'R FACE IS REALE DEMAND A KICK AND SHE HASE ONE BREST BREAST , IN MY VERSION ITS ALL DARK ACCORDINGLY THE IMADUNATION IMAGINATION COMPLEATE THIS  |
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AndyT
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| Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 3:17 pm |
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kosta55555 - I like the colors in your image. I think her head is kinda big and the neck very long though.
That makes the bike look small.
I'd try working on it some more. It would be worth it IMO.
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kosta55555
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| Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 1:39 pm |
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i have added some light efects
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| Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 2:48 pm |
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I like that. It looks as if the bike is hovering though.
Is it just one layer? If not you can try to make the head smaller...
... and the arm as well 
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Matthew
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| Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2003 12:08 am |
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Hello
What I tried to show with my picture is that you have a perspective problem and that the Motorcycle speed movement should move in the bikes direction.
Just a tip, The problem with that the bike looks like it is hovering is because that you have no ground near the wheels.
I hope something helped
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Matthew
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| Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2003 12:20 am |
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Hello again
I tried to show this time what I mean, I hope it helps. The black strokes is the ground. and the purple ones is representing the speed movement. Thou the Vanish point could be more furter in, in the picture, the purple one I mean.
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2003 12:30 am |
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I'd say, keep teh bike and dump teh gurl.
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| Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2003 12:36 am |
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I see a problem with the length of her eyebrow it should be longer. please take care of the eyebrow it will fix quite allot in the picture.
the motercycle looks very cool. nice lines.
-david
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| Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2003 2:55 pm |
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thats one scary gun =]
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