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Plankton
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 Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 11:59 am |
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Hello,
Just wanted to get some feedback on this piece. I wanted to get a feel of where my talent may be, or not be, hehe. I have never really completed any characters so, here it is.
Thanks,
Plankton
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Chthonic Divinity
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 4:25 pm |
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i like him a lot. very good. are they vectors?
im not too keen on the background though. if he is so crisp and clean, why not the rest of the piece?
id like to see everything in the same style. |
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Plankton
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 4:43 pm |
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What i was going for was a distance effect. You know how sometimes whatever your focus is, the rest is kind of blurred, or things in the distance get blurred, but i guess it didnt work very well.
Thanks for the input. I am working on tweaking it right now.
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Chthonic Divinity
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| Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2003 5:07 pm |
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| yeah, i figured thats what you were going for with the waves, but the sun and clouds shouldnt have that effect really. i dunno, its just my personal opinion. |
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kornedup
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| Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2003 3:13 pm |
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EXCELLENT!!  |
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Chthonic Divinity
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| Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2003 3:27 pm |
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i like the way you made the clouds now
much better
the dude on the left is top notch too |
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