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Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

Any advice and/or feedback/crits would be great. Thanks. =]
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viag · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 2:10 am

wow really class !

DubOU4 · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 4:09 am

very cool indeed
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ceenda · member Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030

Absolute class.

(his left hand seems a bit impacted, but I know nothing about drawing anatomy well)

dontfallin · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 6:44 am

thats awesome but where the heck is the Uroborus? unless there's another reason Uroborus is in the title?

marcuslm · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 11:40 am

VERY nice.

neff · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 1:23 pm

looks excelent!
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Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

Thanks guys

dontfallin Er, is an Uroborus something else X_X It was a name I thought I made up for a race of cat people =P
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dontfallin · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 10:22 pm

Ha thats the best!!!! an Uroborus is a snake eating its tale....it means couple of things like infinity and the cycle of life

Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

lol, learn something everyday then =] tnx dude
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ahw · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 11:49 am

I think the correct spelling is Ouroboros (it's a greek word AFAIK).

And your cat warrior truely kicks some ass Smile

I particularly like the Pirate look, very original !
As for criticisms... I am at a loss Razz

rabert · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 2:23 pm

very nice design, but the only thing odd is his shoulder (left), it seems not to be... firm (!?) enough. Yea that's the word i'd use...

firm

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Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

Well, thats a cool word anyway =P

Yeah, I'm gong to rework the whole left side a bit I think, after some feedback.
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legolas · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 11:21 pm

Awesome! Reminds me of some warcraft 3 art!
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phatlip · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 11:58 pm

ah...really nice pencil work there dude. the line work is clean and consistent.

i reckon you should touch up the right arm and shoulder with the strong line work you have done on the left arm, but i know that usually concept artists leave the background less detailed (myself included). Also the hands with the fingers in the correct placement in which they are but more detailed, eg: grabbing the sword and the side bag

Would love to see the designs of the boots.

Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

Legolas, yeah, I"m a big fan of Metzen and Samwise, guess they might have some influence on me somewhere.

phatlip I should tighten it up more, doing concept art is a bit of a hobby. And I never finish the boots X_X And that is an important par tof concept desig, maybe I'll do those designs on another page.
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Matthew · Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2003 11:56 am

Awesome work Hyptosis. Smile

Matthew

Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

hehe, tnx dude
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Dryfire · Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2003 12:28 pm

really cool, nice expression
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Hyptosis · member Member # Joined: 24 Jan 2002 Posts: 507

thanks =]
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