[Special Ed]

Hi. I've been posting these all over, but I desperately need c&c.

I'm applying for art schools and I must be finished with these in a few days, so any comments/tips would help. I consider them about halfway finished.

The second one is supposed to be cheap/dramatic.

What do you think of the composition, colors and so on? Should I remove/add anything? Good/bad? What are your first thoughts when you see them? Thanks.





(Sorry for the bad photos)

[tyron]

i'm loving those two.
i also checked your site and i really like your paintings.
i find it hard to critizise because you have such a personal style.
just keep working on them and only do what you think is fun.

vilken skola ska du s�ka till? ska ocks� b�rja s�ka n�sta �r..
lycka till.

[Special Ed]

Thanks! Is there nothing in the composition/colors that bothers you?


Jag ska s�ka Gerlesborg i Bohusl�n, Konstfack Animation och Mejan. De sista tv� kan man v�l inte r�kna med att komma in p� f�rsta g�ngen, men det �r v�l lika bra att s�ka s� att man kommer p� listan iaf...

[tyron]

maybe you could cut off a bit of the right side on the first painting. i think it makes the picture work better.
otherwise i've got nothing to complain about. the colors are VERY brave and works really well.

mejan? vad �r det?
nej, konstfack �r ju inte alls s� l�tt att komma in p� elitistskola
min l�rare s�ger att jag ska s�ka till n�n illustrationsskola i malm�, du vet inget om den?
lycka till iaf.

[acidcrys]

youre really good with faces.. but the rest you just seem to forget about .. like theyre there but dont really exist.. they also dont all come together exactly in some way - the first one I would suggest adding more.. perhaps more overlapping.. and the second one.. seems pretty good overall..
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[Special Ed]

Acidcrys:

Thanks, you're right. More overlapping, that's a good advice.