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Iliya Zilberter · Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2003 2:23 pm

I've been looking for some fine art forums, and figured this would be the place Smile

I know this is not supposed to be in the art forums, but I thught I would introduce myself with some work of mine.

comments would be very greatly appreciated.
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Iliya Zilberter · Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2003 6:43 pm

Hm, looking back at the posts i noticed that any of you could draw this in 10 minutes. Maybe i should just come back in 5-10 years Confused

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Serenity · Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2003 6:47 pm

Haha I know what you mean.:O Tis a tad intimadating with all these great artist.

Though Yours is really tight. I like the shading and the skin you did. Im currently working on a piece and Im very envious of your skills with skin. Its a great piece in my eyes. Very Happy

MCnasto · Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2003 6:52 pm

i like this portrait alot, the colors are really nice... however if i may make some suggestions: the nose looks a bit odd below the tip, needs a smoother transition.
The shirt looks a little too "sketchy", doesn't quite fit, define it more.
Also some areas could stand to be darker... it would add more realism. (it looks a little flat, the face doesnt have alot of depth.
good stuff, keep at it! its almost finished Wink

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Basement bound · Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2003 11:57 am

Great pallete. Well done. I agree with the Nose the angle and shape of it is a bit off.
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Iliya Zilberter · Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2003 12:08 pm

thanks a lot for the comments Smile

I will have to work on the things you pointed out, especially the contrast problems.
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