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A.pipe · Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2003 1:49 am

this piece for my girlfriend and all coffee lovers
as u see, just beginning......C&C are welcome.

face closeup

dontfallin · Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2003 7:51 am

this is the GREATEST PIC IVE EVER SEEEEEEEEEN! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
maybe its just cause I like coffee.....its awesome

Plumb Lunatic · Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2003 8:49 am

I love the sense of depth in this, and the detail - where it counts. Her hair is fantastic! That must have taken quite some time, though the individual strands of hair are a little thick for me. But then I suppose to draw them in any finer would be just-plain impractical.

I like it.
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Xyster21 · Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 2:04 am

Excellent work Smile

I'd say just work on where that light is coming and where it casts shadows a lil more in the pic.
Now all you need is to whip out the smaller brushes and start detailting/refining everything.
This is definately a cool peice of work
<---- love coffee too. Mr. Green

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acidcrys · member Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2003 Posts: 53 Location: Fl

awesome.. love it... Smile

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A.pipe · Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 2:55 am

u guys helped me a lot...thanks !!
today i added some backgroud things on it..
and made the wings looked like water made..
could u give me more advices?

Yuri · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2003 Posts: 73

Maybe give her face some colour?

She looks rather pale, like as though she's one of those rockers wearing white paint and it doesn't seem to suit rather well with the overall picture.:p

BORGLINK · Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 5:05 am

i like it wery dramatick,, but i would find the light source, and make some shadows, under her eyes, shadow in her eyes, and maby some highlights,,

BORGLINK · Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 5:32 am

i have given her some shades, shades in colour, so you can feel the warmth on her face,, Very Happy

acidcrys · member Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2003 Posts: 53 Location: Fl

Looks great - just one suggestion

the hair.. facing us.. towards the back end of it.. needs to be ended sooner.. and with a more curved look

kind of like that.. but not exactly..
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A.pipe · Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 1:45 am

little update....i'm still thinking about the conformation.
added a flybot, a magicbot(from my sketch), a goldfish,her sketchbook and pencil.. Smile

BORGLINK, ur good suggestion just opened my mind..really thanks

and thank u acidcrys, i had changed the hair,but it still looks funny...need more work maybe....

Yuri · member Member # Joined: 02 Mar 2003 Posts: 73

It looks really good but she still looks very pale(perhaps that was ur intention?). Perhaps some cheek color and some flesh tones on her forehead(which looks kinda flat)?

BORGLINK · Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2003 2:41 am

you a geting there and fast,, but if it was me, if you se the pickture i have done in a haste, wery easy to do ( because its a good drawing you have done Very Happy

) if you see the eyes on my example i have made stronger highlight,, to give her soul, i have used blue light as highligt, beacuse its morning,, made the shadows darkred to give her warmth. her white dress, i have given a red because nothing is white or totaly dark in real life,, DRAk kills, and whithe makes light colours dark,, try to use colour that are neather to dark or to white at first,, then try to use the white or black you will se how strong a highlight alittle white dot can give, �eksample,, try to make all the shadows from her dark red,, the wall dark blue,,try to give all dead things in the room a darkblue shadow, (cold) shadows from her darkred, dark green, is a shadow inbetween cold and warm,, well try it if you want, but still i love the thing you doing,, look at my stuff and give me some adwise, i would love that, because you are wery skilled.. Very Happy