[hamilton]

Here's the deal, i really just need to know how i can fix the perpective in this shot. i don't need character help, please avoid it, unless you've read the books, and i've made a GLARING mistake.

Loial is supposed to be a sort of giant, nearly twice as tall as humans. the other three are roughly the same height. (rand is slightly taller than the other two) i need to know how i can improve the perspective in the shot, while keeping loial fully visible.

please use adjusted images to get your point across if need be. thank you.


here's my original sketch.


here's an updated sketch.
gareth - loial - logain - rand

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[Kingofcups]

Find a vanishing point, probably near bottom left, and draw the architecture using it. Should sort you out.
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[Awetopsy]

dude.. I love the characters.. Awesome stuff.

I agree about the perspective.. find the horizon, draw a perspective point somewhere lower left and make the architecture around it based from that point.