[Noctali]

this is a school girl i did, inspiration from a school friend in my class, crits are welcome...


My site:http://membres.lycos.fr/fscordoart

[Basement bound]

Nice
the face, hair, legs,

areas to work
The skirt needs some sharp areas, and define the pattern
The hands need to be more defined
The background needs some work ie she is kinda floating
The shirt is too bright tone down the colour, and add some actual dark areas.
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[paranoid?]

the neck looks a bit crooked


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[Mr.Manga]

like the style!
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