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Kamal
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I just got finished with this. Soon after I showed it to the Art Director, it became nothing more than just a color comp. I'm going to be practically re-doing it and before I do so, I would like to get more feedback from other people.
What changes would you like to see made on the next iteration of this?
thanks,
Kamal
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Basement bound
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| Posted: Thu Feb 20, 2003 10:55 pm |
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more attention to the girls hair and face.
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mellowsmoothe
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| Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 12:28 am |
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jeez...i havent posted a reply in close to 2 yrs but this one deserves my first one. that is my vision of hell, a naked fat chick with hairy nipples
(among other things)...yes, you have embodied hell. i like how the smaller chick said "screw it, im running", exactly what i would do. the colors are nice, but i would concentrate on form. good job. |
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Blood
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| Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 5:21 am |
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God do I looooooove hairy nipples  , i do love the colors make the stand out more, by giving the background a darker coler... |
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CwStone
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| Posted: Sat Feb 22, 2003 6:16 am |
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the fat one looks a little flat at the arm for some reason...(the one holding up the club) i think the other girl loooks great except her face and hair.
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nottoo
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| Posted: Sat Feb 22, 2003 10:25 am |
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Somehow having a couple of naked women running around doesn't strike me as hell, naked men however...  |
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Dr. Bang
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Kamal
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 1:11 am |
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Thanks For the feedback everybody,
this will really help me when going back and re-doing it. I need to get it done sometime this week, so I'll be posting the revised version soon. This time it'll be even more disturbing and hopefully better drawn.
thanks again for your feedback!
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Radiater
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Of all the monsters, ogres, zombies and orcs I've seen on these pages in the time I've been surfing forums - I've got to say that is the scariest fucking thing I've ever seen! Good job - I just don't think I could ever open your thread again... I'm way too creeped out.
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Markus Schille
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| Posted: Mon Feb 24, 2003 1:19 pm |
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Man, that sure is ugly (the subject matter not the painting). It looks really disturbing! lol!
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