[Adonai]

Hey guys, lemme have it! I'm really trying to learn this stuff - I think I did ok on her face, but the grass imo looks like crap, her hair is a little off, and her hands are screwy, but any tips or pointers to tutorials would be helpful!

Overall I'm pleased with the picture, but still would like any ideas or comments you guys have!
thanks a ton

[pritch]

The main thing that is bugging me is the right arm. How the forearm is much smaller than the upper arm. Distorted proportions don't bother me if they're done well and the waist is very out of proportion but doesn't look to bad. Though if you fix the right forearm this might change. The hard edges compared to the airbrushed fills is another thing. It's not really bothersome, but would be nice to see some differences in hard edges vs. soft in the figure. I don't think the grass looks that bad and it doesn't really need alot of detail since it's not the center point of the piece. The nose looks flat, but once again, you're playing with proportions alot in this piece so that really isn't a big bother.

Overall not a bad piece. To comment on anatomy and other technical things is hard because it really depends on what direction you wish to go with your art(more realistic or stylized). And as far as learning more, just keep drawing, drawing, drawing. Learning is something we all do throughout our artistis lives.