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Andy`Ba · member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2001 Posts: 98

My brother doesn't like it. And I don't know how to improve it.
Pls help.

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Kitamard · Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 4:13 pm

What is it? Like wallpaper or something?
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EviLToYLeT · Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 4:43 pm

think thats cuz it's hard to read the dragon standing on the pedestal? ..... in my mind nothing to do with...blades, ....maybe mistresses Very Happy

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Andy`Ba · member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2001 Posts: 98

ZippySquirrelnut · Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 11:41 pm

What part of it does your brother have a problem with exactly? Is it for a game hes making? if not, why do you care what his opinion is? what is the concept behind the game? we need more information to be able to help properly. aside from that what is strikingly obvious to me is how totally generic it looks, as far as im concerned this could be for any dungeons and dragons style of game, theres nothing on it that identifies it as having anything to do with "Blade Mistress" other than the heading at the top of the screen. i dont know if you can rework around what youve already completed, but it might be the wiser decision to just start from scratch.
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AnKart · Posted: Thu Jan 30, 2003 6:04 pm

Andy`Ba I think it's a complete mess...you should do another one, this one is hopeless Wink

and imho it would be better if you wouldn''t stress the lighting so much - and the detail...

Capt. Fred · Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 2:58 pm

I like it.
Just needs to be made mre coherent and 'gathered' (I don't mean spacially).

DarkVVulf · Posted: Thu Feb 06, 2003 5:50 pm

It's rather interesting, it has this weird heavy detailed claymation look to it.
But I'm having a hard time visually comprehending the dragon. I can't tell if there are supposted to be arms attached to it or what.
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lalPOOO · Posted: Sun Feb 16, 2003 12:52 pm

I think the reason the dragon looks strange is becase the image is so tiny...

The only thing I don't like is the yellow around the text at the top, just doesn't seem to fit in.
Anyways, I think other then that it looks fabulous!

Andy`Ba · member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2001 Posts: 98

Actualy it's not a dragon it a gargoyle.
It lacks details because it's a very low poly model.
From the game itself.
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tilokani · Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2003 5:42 pm

I don't think it lacks detail par se. I think there's too much detail. There are too many things to focus on and it's very ineffective, in my opinion, as a resolution option screen. Most games, if you notice, are simple yet attractive. No One Lives Forever for example, is expressed on an orange background with a few moving bubbles to incoorperate its 60's theme. Ofcourse, your theme is somewhat diobolical as interpreted from the picture, it says too much. If you know what I mean.
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